Self Evaluation

Final Product

Boards

Final Crit

The final and most useful crit, I think I got most ouut of this crit, good fedback an lots to concider and work on. I know I need to work on a wider range of products for the exhibition, not only the Zine and the Advertisement through posters, banners and billboards. time permitting I will endeavour to apply some of my feed back to my work, especially the promo materials. 

Mock Boards

Revised Rational

(Revised) Concept Statement

GOOD IS... Manned Space Exploration

Why?

1. The advances in technology.
2. The collaboration between nations.
3. Discoveries.
4. The human achievement of space exploration. 
5. Commercial space travel

I intends to (inform/instruct/persuade/direct/educate/promote to)

Inform, educate and promote manned space exploration over the past 50 years.

...a group of (identify your specific audience or context)

School students aged 11-16. 

...that (state your message, idea, concept)

To show the achievement of manned space exploration.

In order to achieve this I will produce...

A free magazine, that will run along side an exhibition at the National Space Centre that documents and celebrates  the past 50years of manned space exploration. I will also design the promotional materials to go in schools across the country  as well as the streets for public view. The magazine will be placed in schools and libraries to encourage people to see the exhibition.   

Product- what is your product

Posters, banners, fliers and main shots to publicise the exhibition and magazine.

Range- what range of deliverable will you produce/propose

Large scale posters and promotional materials surrounding the exhibition at NSC and the launch of the magazine. 

Context- define the context in which your product will exist/be viewed

There will be posters and magazines in schools and libraries. There would also be large scale posters, banners and billboards in strategically placed parts of towns and cities to involve parents as well as the children. 

Concept Boards

Project Rationale

Concept Statement

GOOD IS... Manned Space Exploration

Why?

1. The advances in technology.
2. The collaboration between nations.
3. Discoveries.
4. The human achievement of space exploration. 
5. Commercial space travel

I intends to (inform/instruct/persuade/direct/educate/promote to)

Inform, educate and promote manned space exploreation over the past 50 years.

...a group of (identify your specific audience or context)

Students and young adults in all forms of education.

...that (state your message, idea, concept)

To show the achivement of manned space exploreation.

In order to achieve this I will produce...

a free magazine documenting the past 50years of manned space exploreation, that could be placed in libraries, schools, colleges and universities.

Product- what is your product

A free magazine.

Range- what range of deliverable will you produce/propose

A magazine or set of magazines documenting the last 50 years of human space travel.

Context- define the context in which your product will exist/be viewed

In libraries, schools, colleges and universities as an intresting and informative guide to mans achievement. 

Wrap it up Crit

Strengths 

Very strong design.

Linning up with packaging is smart.

Scaling range of packageing.

Colour pallet works well.

Proffesional asthetics. 

Using acetate is a good finishing quality. 

Areas for improvement

Would be more refined if the logo is vectorised. logo is complex, possibly too much.

Could focus a rocket imagery for logo.

Stay clear of live trace.

See how the design works when uncentred.

Logos Crit 5-10-2011

As a part of the crit I was instructed to pick my 10 favorite logos form the 150 I had designed, after choosing my favorite 10 images, a group of my peers collaborated in critiquing the 10 to choose one image for me to further develop for the next crit.

Crit Feedback// 

• Revise spelling.
• Develop type /Font.
• Try reverse out.
• try making the 'O' clearer as another object/ symbol (as if it is in orbit)
• Possibly look at 3 dimensional images.
• and the use of the arrows, position/scale/line/quality.

The image chosen from the crit.